In class today I worked on the following parts of my paper:
- I worked on finding the purpose of the paper to help create a proper thesis
- I wrote a new thesis and redirected my paper
- I worked on the topic sentences for my body paragraphs
- I thought more about how to conclude the paper now that I had a defined purpose
- I still need to work on evidence for my claims made in my body paragraphs
- I need to rewrite my introduction
- I will try to define what an effective ad is in the introduction and have a following paragraph summarizing the ad itself
- I will make sure to have proper formatting